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In the hottest depths of hell
That my being yet had been
He was with me at the hospital
Eating caramel creme
My face was the face of terror
Stared by an entire city
And though it was hard to bear
He glanced at me like I was pretty
One nurse looked me in revulsion
And my tongue went slightly loose
And I smiled at her convulsion
Like an outlaw at the noose
She was nearly saying prayers
I told her to get a grip
No one likes to see your layers
When the surface mask is stripped
In this hot decaying prison
I am nothing but a ghost
Makes you doubtful of the reason
That you're living for the most
Mind or body? Mind or body?
Which dies faster, who's in charge?
Who's the whip that whips the servant
Into keeping up the march?
If it's all about willpower
It's the mind that holds the reins
Yet the mind is such a coward
When the body is in pain
Weak flesh holds the spirit captive
Spirit tells it not to scream
Death sits next to me attractive
Eating caramel creme
Life once got me into dreaming
But did not give me a chance
Even all the devils in me
Do not always want to dance
Yet I dance this dance so well -
Even those who hate me know it -
Waltzing on the way to hell
With philosophers and poets
They alone know how I'm feeling
Without knowing me or trying:
To be dead while you are living
And alive while you are dying
Them, and that one ghostly fella
At the hospital cafe
With the ghostly girl to tell her
She should live another day
Maybe one fine day we'll wake up
And this all will be a dream
You'll wear black and I'll wear make-up
Eating caramel creme
That my being yet had been
He was with me at the hospital
Eating caramel creme
My face was the face of terror
Stared by an entire city
And though it was hard to bear
He glanced at me like I was pretty
One nurse looked me in revulsion
And my tongue went slightly loose
And I smiled at her convulsion
Like an outlaw at the noose
She was nearly saying prayers
I told her to get a grip
No one likes to see your layers
When the surface mask is stripped
In this hot decaying prison
I am nothing but a ghost
Makes you doubtful of the reason
That you're living for the most
Mind or body? Mind or body?
Which dies faster, who's in charge?
Who's the whip that whips the servant
Into keeping up the march?
If it's all about willpower
It's the mind that holds the reins
Yet the mind is such a coward
When the body is in pain
Weak flesh holds the spirit captive
Spirit tells it not to scream
Death sits next to me attractive
Eating caramel creme
Life once got me into dreaming
But did not give me a chance
Even all the devils in me
Do not always want to dance
Yet I dance this dance so well -
Even those who hate me know it -
Waltzing on the way to hell
With philosophers and poets
They alone know how I'm feeling
Without knowing me or trying:
To be dead while you are living
And alive while you are dying
Them, and that one ghostly fella
At the hospital cafe
With the ghostly girl to tell her
She should live another day
Maybe one fine day we'll wake up
And this all will be a dream
You'll wear black and I'll wear make-up
Eating caramel creme
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Actually a little bit proud of this one on account of honesty.
(Is bad experience a requirement for decent poetry?)
P.S. Don't judge me for putting Baudelaire's name in the keyword section. No relation to the poem, I just thought of him for no reason.
(Is bad experience a requirement for decent poetry?)
P.S. Don't judge me for putting Baudelaire's name in the keyword section. No relation to the poem, I just thought of him for no reason.
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This is one of the best poems I've ever read from you. I hope with all my heart that you'll live happier days and eat as much caramel cream as you like, my friend.